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There are parts of me that still need editing
or they don’t
but I edit anyway,
a period here, a comma there,
some verbs where they aren’t needed tell me are they
stop
we’ll go to sleep now,
editing can be done tomorrow
or not at all
because when I’m with you
I forget to-
because when you’re with me,
it is -I am- complete.
Literature
Love
Love
Flower, flower
Sweet, red and mine
You make my world spin
You make my words rhyme
Blossom, blossom
How pretty you are
The te
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Is This Love?
I walk down a crooked, broken pathway
A lone tear permanently attached to my cheek
Exhaustion explodes from every pore
Food will not satisfy
Water will not quench
All hope is gone
But as long as I'm with you, I will not stumble
You are all I need to satisfy and quench my needs
Hope will slowly return
My heart is broken;
Lies nearly dead in a heap of despair
Little pieces are broken off here and there
They won't be coming back.
But you are slowly piecing me back together
You are bringing life back into mi corazon
I have faith you can find the missing pieces
When we're together, I feel balanced
I'm madly in love in a calm way
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ok, i was planning on writing a haiku, which is by definition according to [link] "Haiku is a poetic form and a type of poetry from the Japanese culture. Haiku combines form, content, and language in a meaningful, yet compact form....The first line usually contains five (5) syllables, the second line seven (7) syllables, and the third line contains five (5) syllables. Haiku doesn't rhyme"
but as i have no ideas how meters work and i suck at diving the words into syllables, i couldn't do it properly and ended up with this...so yeah
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but as i have no ideas how meters work and i suck at diving the words into syllables, i couldn't do it properly and ended up with this...so yeah
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"usually" does not mean mandatory. i think you did a good job of conveying your meaning.